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Its Gettin So Hard

Its gettin so hard to climb this mountain my heart overflowin like a fountain these trials keep comin faster and faster with things that keep turnin into disasters It feels so cold out here Im standin in da rain no room for me out here these trials killin my brain Im not tryin to please nobody I cant please But still I got to keep pushin till he set me free I know dis aint the way that life supposed to be and im askin him to help me with the things I cant see When storms keep a stormin The trials keep a comin When winds keep a blowin My heart overflowin

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/19/2009 2:56:00 PM

There are days when things will get better, and those days will be greater. I like the essence of the poem and the flow of the theme. Great job! ~Joseph

Prom King

Date: 5/13/2009 7:26:00 AM

this poem is very true

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/8/2009 11:21:00 AM

...i really like this

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/8/2009 5:31:00 AM

Eric, Sometimes life's trials seem unbearable and we start to think like Job. So think> this, too, shall pass. (Sometimes, it has to be thought in plural.) God bless you through your trials. There are people who care. Sometimes you don't even know from where. But relief comes just in the nick of time. (By the way, did you happen to pray for patience or wisdom....A trial overload certainly follows and teaches those two attributes. ) Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/6/2009 11:28:00 AM

yes, it's a hard rain. Light & Love

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/6/2009 10:02:00 AM

Words flow beautifully.