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It's Finally Over

I can’t handle being whatever I was.
I don’t want to be whatever it is,
No more.
You have closed the door.
We are out of business,
A business never legit.
I won’t handle it.
It’s finally over.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2010 3:30:00 PM

really good little write there! Sounds like a love affair or something! Luv, andrea

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/15/2010 11:36:00 PM

When you can't handle being whatever you were, and finally declare that it's finally over, you then pick up the pieces and get on with your life with an attitude ever so sobre. - Great Write Nicole. Best Wishes Always, Bill

Date: 1/15/2010 4:12:00 PM

I think most can relate closing doors on things that haven't worked out. Interesting slant. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2010 12:52:00 PM

Open ended write with which one could go in many direction. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara