It's Feeble So Falls

a heavy structure
                                 constructed on very weak plinth
                                         it's feeble so falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Hi BL, what you write, so true, sadder still if it is a large building on a weak foundation, that is actually what i pictured while reading. The words say it all BL. A seven for this Senryu my friend. Have a good day....Vlad.
Devnath  Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment,bl
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 2:57 AM
bL, Deep and intriguing but I remember a story that i can connect with this!~Olive ELoisa
Devnath  Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Thank you my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 2:53 PM
- Lovely my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 6:34 PM
yes, so the wall falls!! It is like the scripture about building a house on sand!
Devnath  Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always,bl
Trifiatis Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Thought provoking, my friend, BL!
Devnath  Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 12:36 AM
It's a philosophy that covers many fields of life, yes my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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