Get Your Premium Membership

Its all in the Titles

During our “Evening Walk” along, this “Golden Valley” you were singing a song. I realized that my “Prior wish” had come true. Everything I do is “Better with you”. There have been “Chaotic day”s, a few. Some times that were not “Always fun”. Points when our loves “Demise” could have begun. “Through it all” I am so much “Better with you”. Because of you I am a “Proud Father” of four. You are “Forever Beautiful” and all “I need”. Filling my mind with “Sweet memories”. You are “My guiding light” that I adore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/19/2013 6:36:00 AM
I like the way you put this together. Captivating titles and poem. I think I'll enter your contest :)
Login to Reply
Hapworth Avatar
Adam Hapworth
Date: 8/19/2013 6:52:00 AM
Thank you. Look forward to reading your entry.