Charles Gerald Patrick Chard 2nd Poet Rhyme

It's All a Blur

It's all a blur, I can not think,
What once was is now not,
All was gone in a blink,
There's only one slim thread of a thought,

I tried my best to think it through, But I can't,
I tried my best to think it out loud,
Other's hear as I rant,
O GOD help me remember, I shouted that aloud,

I glimmer of though came through my mind, more then before,
My thoughts ar becoming a bit more clear,
The clouds in my mind have opened the door,
I now remember a lot it's all becoming so near,

It was all my fault, I can see that now,
Through a drunking haze, I now see,
My loud mouth and rowdy ways, is how,
My mind did forget what really happened to me.

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Beata Agustin April 17, 2024 at 1:08 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.