Home » Poems » Hilo Poet » It's About Time: Nursery rhyme

Hilo Poet | + Follow Poet |

It's About Time: Nursery rhyme

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Hilo Poet.

Poetic Form: Rhyme (Nursery)
Inspired: 2023 December 13

*1st Place*
nursery rhymes or stories
Contest Judged: 2023 December 22
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

Image: What Time Is It? by Amazon Music

Telling Time (What Time Is It) by Little Baby Bum Nursery Rhyme Friends on Amazon Music - Amazon.com

Party it up with the Wrights

My precious li'l minutes, the sky is the limits. My darling sweet seconds, Rocky Horsey beckons. So let us catch ... the day, and let it go ... its way. Today lives ... yesterday, tomorrow ... lives today. Buy A, B, C's instead ..., buying time ... it'll be read. Time flies ... my small pilots, spread your wings ... it's just us. Time waits for no one, thus, the world's counting on us. Thoughts of time when you cared, got better when you shared. Though it's free ... nonetheless, ROAR, Lion's share ... priceless.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/26/2023 6:44:00 AM

Took a smile for this, Silent One, Aloha, William

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2023 10:21:00 PM

William, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/24/2023 10:29:00 PM

Thanks a whole bunch, Eve. Mele Kalikimaka a Hau'oli Maka Hiki Hou 2024. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2023 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun Nursery Rhyme write/story. Fun ending/picture. Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/23/2023 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I am very please that you've made the effort to acknowledge the nursery rhyme. Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 2:13:00 PM

Nice one...I need to write on this one also..have no idea what it will be though...

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/14/2023 4:08:00 PM

Methinks the tone of my write is geared for secondary levels then elementary my dear doctor Silent One. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/14/2023 6:56:00 AM

Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem and the message it conveys, William.-- Today lives ... yesterday, tomorrow ... lives today.Time flies ... my small pilots, spread your wings ... it's just us--words of truth and inspiration!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/14/2023 7:12:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay, for your insights and highlights--but truth betold, methinks it caters to, mayhaps, a higher schooling level? Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/14/2023 4:36:00 AM

a delightfully adorable nursey rhyme, William! I can see children truly enjoying this one. If you created this for a contest, best wishes with your entry. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/14/2023 4:53:00 AM

Happily am I, Sara, for your delightful caring words, and sentiments of encouragement. You are a blessed soul dawning nicely on this Thursday morning, my friend. Aloha, William