William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Poetic Form: Rhyme (Nursery)
Inspired: 2023 December 13

 

*1st Place*
nursery rhymes or stories
Contest Judged: 2023 December 22
Sponsored by: Eve Roper

 

Image: What Time Is It? by Amazon Music

It's About Time: Nursery rhyme

My precious li'l minutes,
the sky is the limits.

My darling sweet seconds,
Rocky Horsey beckons.

So let us catch ... the day,
and let it go ... its way.

Today lives ... yesterday,
tomorrow ... lives today.

Buy A, B, C's instead ...,
buying time ... it'll be read.

Time flies ... my small pilots,
spread your wings ... it's just us.

Time waits for no one, thus,
the world's counting on us.

Thoughts of time when you cared,
got better when you shared.

Though it's free ... nonetheless,
ROAR, Lion's share ...  priceless.

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Silent One December 26, 2023 at 6:34 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. William Kelii Kekaula December 26, 2023 at 6:44 AM Took a smile for this, Silent One, Aloha, William

Eve Roper December 24, 2023 at 10:21 PM William, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas. William Kelii Kekaula December 24, 2023 at 10:29 PM Thanks a whole bunch, Eve. Mele Kalikimaka a Hau'oli Maka Hiki Hou 2024. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith December 23, 2023 at 12:50 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun Nursery Rhyme write/story. Fun ending/picture. Have A Very Blessed Christmas.................. William Kelii Kekaula December 23, 2023 at 12:55 PM Thank you, Paula. I am very please that you've made the effort to acknowledge the nursery rhyme. Aloha, William

Silent One December 14, 2023 at 2:13 PM Nice one...I need to write on this one also..have no idea what it will be though... William Kelii Kekaula December 14, 2023 at 4:08 PM Methinks the tone of my write is geared for secondary levels then elementary my dear doctor Silent One. Aloha, William

Vijay Pandit December 14, 2023 at 6:56 AM Much enjoyed the tenor of your poem and the message it conveys, William.-- Today lives ... yesterday, tomorrow ... lives today.Time flies ... my small pilots, spread your wings ... it's just us--words of truth and inspiration! William Kelii Kekaula December 14, 2023 at 7:12 AM Thanks, Vijay, for your insights and highlights--but truth betold, methinks it caters to, mayhaps, a higher schooling level? Aloha, William