Ava Douglass Poet Lyric

Its a Thrill

Every time I go
to the place we know
I get sad inside 
and i want to hide

when i think of you 
and the things you do
I want to run away
break down and cry

And Its a thrill
But it kills
and we're still
not anywhere

and i know that we're not going soon
but i don't care.


BY: Ava Douglass
Age: 12

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Beata Agustin July 12, 2025 at 5:45 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A January 27, 2016 at 2:10 PM AVA, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT -

Sue Mason January 26, 2010 at 4:34 PM Wonderful writing here, Ava and I look forward to reading lots more from you!! Thanks so much for reaching out to comment on others writing too and Welcome to PoetrySoup ... hope you have lots of fun here!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2010 at 7:45 PM Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with all of us.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Ava Douglass January 17, 2010 at 12:23 PM As i was writing this one I made it into a song! I LOVE SINGIGING!!!!!

Ava Douglass January 17, 2010 at 12:18 PM THANKYOU¬!

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2010 at 6:33 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ava. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2010 at 5:55 AM In every life there is some loneliness and sadness but these times make us strong. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Anthony Nutter January 17, 2010 at 4:20 AM Ava, this is a very nice write and I can feel the sincerity and emotions pouring out in this poem. Well done, stay encouraged and continue to grow in your writing.