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It's a Promise

It's a promise Every moment, with every single breath I take, it's a new promise, new chance, to make. To make it better, then one before, before yesterday. Every morning, after I open my eyes, there is one more hope for us, one new start. So, what should, or could, I do today? that is better, and different then yesterday, So, please , you....... tell me...... Weld a heart out of steel, for you, I can do that....... Build a steel cage, to cage my self in, I can do that...... To live for you, make you laugh, I can do that...... Die for you, so you don't have to, I can do that....... but. don't ask me to leave you alone, don't ask me that, anything, you may ask, but ......

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Date: 2/8/2013 10:56:00 AM
A beautiful poem! It expressed the extreme steps of what individuals would do to capture another persons heart even though there is no guarantee that love one will stay. Have a beautiful weekend Simmplissity= Patricia Lewis
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Date: 2/5/2013 3:44:00 PM
Thank you Linda, and I will try as well as you,Take care,Ivy
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Date: 2/5/2013 3:27:00 PM
Ismeta, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"
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