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It's a Hummer

peach sun has come back long hours of rain and thunder hummingbird plunder hued blooms gather with the stunning jeweled wonder stained rite of summer noon pause for orange and backwards flight aflutter butterfly colors rapid wing whispers velvet time is life's usher gold midday mutters
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Wolf Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 7:39 PM
Your haikus just get better and better and better, Evelyn. Rejoice, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 7:51 PM
So nice to read your warm compliment, my friend. Thank you. :)
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 3:50 PM
A beautiful series of haiku, Evelyn: I could read them over and over- just as you watch a hummingbird- mesmerized. SuZ
Buehler Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 7:49 PM
You have my deepest thanks, SuZ.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 8:17 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/beautiful Haiku write. Love the picture... Have a blessed day writing away......................
Buehler Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 9:14 PM
Many thanks for your appreciation, dear friend. So glad you liked this. I hope your week is wonderful. :)
Greenhough Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 8:17 AM
The hummingbird is sort of a poem in flight. Thank you for writing about this wonderful bird.
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 8:59 PM
Much of the magic of living is finding joy in God's creatures and in the beauty of nature. Thank you very much for your valued comments.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 1:23 AM
A captivating series of haikus that bring out the beauty of nature. So much appreciated.
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 8:53 PM
Your words are exactly what I needed to make me smile. Thank you so much. :)
Rodgers Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 5:31 PM
Dear Evelyn, your poem is a wonderful ode to the cyclical beauty of nature. I loved the imagery of hummingbirds, butterflies, and amazing blooms of the changing seasons with breathtaking detail. It's life's perpetual rhythm and the ephemeral splendor of each moment. Beautiful! - Blessings, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 8:51 PM
Thank you for affording my day a measure of delight, with your touching remarks, Daniel. Have a nice weekend, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:21 AM
- lovely haiku pearls...beautifully described, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 6:01 AM
A lovely photo--exuberance of spring floating on wings, Delightful images bring to fore the frolicking bird.
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Deepest thanks for your heartwarming expressions of appreciation. Kindest regards.
One Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 2:56 AM
A lovely collection of haiku.. The choice of words create vivid imagery...
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:30 PM
Your compliments bring smiles. Thank you so much.
Empress Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:08 AM
How beautiful and rhythmic are your words woven here in the form Of haiku! So clever and artistic as always dear evelyn judy, you have a way with painting imagery in the most captivating manner! And this is no exception! A fave for me it is
Buehler Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Thank you very much for your precious remarks, Ink. Your gracious compliments are a thrill, as is your kind fave. Blessings.
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