Red Fiery Poet Rhyme

It Was Winter

It never rained ,they were my tears;
                 the sunken secrets
    behind my dazzling deep eyes !
              It was winter and we were lovers
    its winter again and my love is frozen
              my heart is hoarse and insane,
     A ruined love  song rings through my ears.
            accursed emotions breaking into tears
      my lips are bleeding with your kisses
             a venomous love releases
                   a sad winter's tale :(




Red @ 2012 3.30 am singapore...

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Harry Horsman January 8, 2012 at 3:36 AM sure is sad Red, but a wonderful read. are you in singapore? i love it there, been many times when living in Perth western australia. harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 6, 2012 at 11:18 PM EXCELLENT AND CREATIVE LINES SO IMPRESSIVE RED FIERY.. THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENTS ON MY POETRY.. LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE LINES FROM U LUV..

John Aaron Green January 6, 2012 at 8:45 PM very beautiful,,ms fiery,,its a tear,,heart and soul poem...

M.I.A . January 4, 2012 at 8:13 PM oooww, pain just surging out from this beautiful written poetry Red... keeping you in my thoughts

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2012 at 1:50 PM Lovely,sad and beautiful written Red.(frozen love.....sad)OXOX hugs Anne-Lise

Krystal Cochrane January 4, 2012 at 12:28 PM I feel the emotion in this, very well written. I love your lines: my lips are bleeding with your kisses a venomous love releases a sad winter's tale :(