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It Was One of Those Mornings

Outside my window, all is dull and white As morning spreads on cracks across the bay, Her prickly fissures stark, like threads contrite, Against the pewter of a frigid day Where sullen the view from iced winds’ replay. I see a varnished gleam in my heart’s eye While peonies are climbing at the gate , That birds of red and yellow twit nearby, Enchanting leafy maples, so ornate Till sundew bursts on fresh morn, to elate! Contest:It Was One Of Those Mornings Sponsor: Sara Kendrick 9/19/2016

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Date: 3/25/2016 8:30:00 PM
Wonderful write, Nette, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:00:00 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2016 7:43:00 AM
Hi nette: Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:22:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Loved the imagery....Vlad.
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Date: 3/23/2016 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great imagery.
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Date: 3/23/2016 2:56:00 PM
What a contrast! and how poetical it all sounds! Most of the entries appear to have been based on light poetry and fun. Congratulations on placing with this lovely entry, Nette! hugs // paul
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:07:00 PM
Dear Nette A sweet vision of nature, and the changing of the seasons, love the second verse the best it's just lovely my friend, and thanks for your review of my poetry as well, cheri
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Date: 3/20/2016 1:55:00 PM
oh yes, what a difference nature makes, Nette. I too am deeply affected by the clime!! Great entry.
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Date: 3/19/2016 10:28:00 PM
Nette, you have painted an extremely beautiful picture of morning with your wonderful pen... Your style of writing is unique... 7/7.. Hugs Red
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Date: 3/19/2016 2:39:00 PM
Hi nette: You personified a pleasant morning elaborately. Great Write!
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Date: 3/19/2016 10:40:00 AM
A visual and emotional treat!
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:44:00 AM
Dear Nette Simply a beautiful write Nette loved the flow of natural engery in this one, just awesome my poetic friend, the imagery is outstanding, and marvelous, it reads like a first place entry, cheri
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Date: 3/19/2016 6:14:00 AM
- .......... I believe it will be a beautiful day - A wonderful win poem, good luck Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2016 3:41:00 AM
Atuned to nature can be bliss! Nice, Nette! jimmy
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Date: 3/19/2016 1:32:00 AM
Amazing exploration of opposing themes. I love your morning melodies, dear poet!
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Date: 3/19/2016 12:39:00 AM
Good luck on the contest! I enjoyed your poem!
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