Anindya Mohan Tagore Poet Shape

It Was One of Those Mornings

I woke up
With a headache
In that morning with a sombre sky
With my tea cup in hand I opened the newspaper
Got struck with a front page news: Fire in Book Fair
Ah! That’s why the vapoured wisdoms and burnt poems
Have created this grim nature – to mourn their comrades death

I was excited to experience the feelings for the first time in my life
Doctors told me “there is risk, the baby may be premature”
But we didn't have any other choice than this one only
Let the baby come out to get some fresh air here
I heard the cry, Oh! My god, the baby was okay
The Sister came and called me up to see
I jumped in the air in joy -
My fatherhood

07.03.16 


It is very difficult to create any shape with two stanzas. Still I have tried my level best to represent the morning sun through my piece.

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Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 11:04 AM Double congrats-a good job done, Bobby! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 27, 2016 at 8:37 AM Thanks a lot, Balveen. Hugs, Bobby

Ralph Sergi March 25, 2016 at 7:26 AM Great poem and very innovative! Congratulations, Anindya! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 25, 2016 at 10:36 PM Thanks a lot, Ralph, for your visit and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Vladislav Raven March 23, 2016 at 9:35 PM Hi Bobby, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent piece my friend. Your work is well crafted. You can actually see a shimmering sun that you can see early morning. I enjoyed the read my Friend. I send you a seven and put it in my faves....Vlad. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:32 AM Thank you so very much, Vlad, for your continuous support and compliments. Hugs, Bobby

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 3:17 PM Excellent! Congratulations on your win in this contest. Very creatively written. A 7. Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:33 AM Thanks a lot Susan. Hugs, Bobby

Connie Marcum Wong March 22, 2016 at 9:58 PM There is nothing as divine as new birth. Loved this Bobby. Congratulations on your win! ;) Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:34 AM Yes, Connie. Thanks a lot for your visit and love. Hugs, Bobby

Brian Mcclain March 22, 2016 at 9:41 PM Hi Anindya, Excellent poem, congrats on your win. The metaphor of the book fair fire vapor as your source of inspiration is epic. Cheers, Brian Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:35 AM Thank you so very much, Brian, for your visit and compliments. Cheers, Bobby

Sara Kendrick March 22, 2016 at 5:45 PM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:36 AM Thank you so very much, Sara. Hugs, Bobby

Eve Roper March 22, 2016 at 11:57 AM Congratulations on your win, Anindya, the second stanza heartfelt!!! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 24, 2016 at 8:37 AM Thanks a lot, Eve. Hugs, Bobby

Carrie Richards March 11, 2016 at 1:13 PM And, ps......thank you so much for your kind comments.....I'm very grateful you took time to read a few of mine :) Anindya Mohan Tagore March 11, 2016 at 8:44 PM My pleasure, Carrie. Learning from you people. Hugs, Bobby

Carrie Richards March 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM Ahhh....this heart-warming story is so beautifully written. What a joyful ending to your poem!! Anindya Mohan Tagore March 11, 2016 at 8:41 PM Thanks a lot, Carrie. Happy to know that it has touched your heart. Hugs, Bobby