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It Was One of Those Mornings

dawn’s barbed talons slowly splay a sleepless night… crimson scars daybreak’s ruby blouse softly drapes a diamond skirt… morning dew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 3/24/2016 8:32:00 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara...This modern Haiku was awesome..
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Date: 3/23/2016 10:03:00 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your win in the Contest. This has to be a seven and it goes into my faves. You can't beat a well wriyyen Haiku David. Enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/23/2016 3:39:00 PM
Great imagery! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:03:00 PM
Great write congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 3/2/2016 3:49:00 PM
wow, I was just thinking "how could I do this challenge with haiku?" and here I see your amazing example. I love it.
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