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It Was One of Those Mornings

dawn’s barbed talons
slowly splay a sleepless night…
            crimson scars

     daybreak’s ruby blouse
softly drapes a diamond skirt…
             morning dew

morninghaiku

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Sara Kendrick

March 24, 2016 at 8:32 AM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara...This modern Haiku was awesome..

Vladislav Raven

March 23, 2016 at 10:03 PM

Hi David, Congratulations on your win in the Contest. This has to be a seven and it goes into my faves. You can't beat a well wriyyen Haiku David. Enjoyed the read....Vlad.