Nadine Fababier Poet Romanticism

It Was February

Caressing breeze, I'm bound to freeze
Season of smiles, please stay for a while
The sun is beaming, your eyes are gleaming
The cars were screaming and the birds are singing

Roses in bloom
they took away my gloom
Radiant specter that was pacific in hue
I flew away to the skies so blue

Ardent love, holding you passionately
14Th of February, it was extraordinary
You smiled so vague and left me without a clue
It was one in the afternoon when you said "I Love You"

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Debbie Guzzi September 4, 2009 at 5:22 AM here's your friendly critic ;) don't puy rhyme within the line ie breeze/freeze..smile/while..and then not continue it throughout. The rest is end rhyme which is fine and the verse seems to be more of a couplet form. I really liked the final verse alot! Light & Love