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It Was February

Caressing breeze, I'm bound to freeze Season of smiles, please stay for a while The sun is beaming, your eyes are gleaming The cars were screaming and the birds are singing Roses in bloom they took away my gloom Radiant specter that was pacific in hue I flew away to the skies so blue Ardent love, holding you passionately 14Th of February, it was extraordinary You smiled so vague and left me without a clue It was one in the afternoon when you said "I Love You"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/4/2009 5:22:00 AM
here's your friendly critic ;) don't puy rhyme within the line ie breeze/freeze..smile/while..and then not continue it throughout. The rest is end rhyme which is fine and the verse seems to be more of a couplet form. I really liked the final verse alot! Light & Love
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