It turns back, the deeper you wade

They say there's more of you,
back in the day.
You're a shell of a man,
that's what they say.

Go back! Find it, find it!
Less, less, you cry.
Not sad; angry, empty.
Try again, you lie.

Yet it spreads further, 
beyond the now, the why, the how.
Never better, but sometimes worse:
what will time allow?

Do you know where to look?
As you close in, it fades.
Not away, Not ever away...
It turns back, the deeper you wade.
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November 8, 2024 at 9:36 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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