It Takes Time To See the Light

IT TAKES TIME TO SEE THE LIGHT

Death is best taught in the dark
Fetching sticks, setting sparks
Its bag of tricks: sickness and hope
A black curtain vanishes
The magician leaves you with a moonless night
A lonely night without stars
And you work to locate those sparkling crystals
And place them one at a time back in the sky
But tears fall like glass, resetting the progress
You need to accept the inevitable
But no one can do the Impossible
So cling to the possible
Surround yourself with an armloads of friends
Let them take turns dabbing your mascara
As their handkerchiefs turn from white to black
One day you’ll find the moon back in its place
You will wonder how long you missed it


1st Place
4/7/2017
DIDACTIC FORM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/13/2020 8:25:00 AM
soup poetry sent this poem to my email. I'm glad I took the time to read it. Thank you. Congrates on the lifetime memebership.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2020 1:05:00 PM
Thanj you, G. Jay!
Date: 3/27/2020 8:39:00 AM
Nicely poured down ! Congrats !! May your pal's soul Rest In Peace !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2020 1:10:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/8/2020 9:39:00 PM
Congrats.... Really, it is an excellent write. Loved the flow. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2020 10:49:00 PM
Thanks so much! God bless you too!
Date: 5/6/2018 12:56:00 PM
Excellent poem - thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 4/29/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Kim this poem has helped me because I am facing a loss of my girlfriend that passed away a couple of days before Easter. A 7
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 7:30:00 PM
I'm glad you found it comforting, Darlene. Sorry about your girlfriend <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 7:30:00 PM
I'm glad you found it comforting, Darlene. Sorry about your girlfriend <3
Date: 4/26/2017 12:25:00 PM
This is magical for anyone facing loss. Thanks Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 4/25/2017 8:16:00 PM
Congrats Kim to win top on yuor nice piece. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/25/2017 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful write Kim, congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/25/2017 12:16:00 PM
Great write and win Kim...Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/25/2017 8:02:00 AM
Kim, your poem deeply addresses the pain of the death of a loved one and the process to heal with such magical imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! A Fav and 7 for me. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2017 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra!
Date: 4/24/2017 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your First placement in the contest. Well done! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2017 9:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 4/8/2017 2:56:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your words are wise, full of life and promise. Emile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/8/2017 5:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Emile!
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