It Takes Time To See the Light

IT TAKES TIME TO SEE THE LIGHT

Death is best taught in the dark
Fetching sticks, setting sparks
Its bag of tricks: sickness and hope
A black curtain vanishes
The magician leaves you with a moonless night
A lonely night without stars
And you work to locate those sparkling crystals
And place them one at a time back in the sky
But tears fall like glass, resetting the progress
You need to accept the inevitable
But no one can do the Impossible
So cling to the possible
Surround yourself with an armloads of friends
Let them take turns dabbing your mascara
As their handkerchiefs turn from white to black
One day you’ll find the moon back in its place
You will wonder how long you missed it


1st Place
4/7/2017
DIDACTIC FORM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jay Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 8:25 AM
soup poetry sent this poem to my email. I'm glad I took the time to read it. Thank you. Congrates on the lifetime memebership.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Thanj you, G. Jay!
Pachaya Gowda Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 8:39 AM
Nicely poured down ! Congrats !! May your pal's soul Rest In Peace !
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 1:10 PM
Thank you!
Roy Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Congrats.... Really, it is an excellent write. Loved the flow. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2020 at 10:49 PM
Thanks so much! God bless you too!
Marc Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Excellent poem - thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:52 PM
Thanks so much!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Thank you Kim this poem has helped me because I am facing a loss of my girlfriend that passed away a couple of days before Easter. A 7
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 7:30 PM
I'm glad you found it comforting, Darlene. Sorry about your girlfriend <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 7:30 PM
I'm glad you found it comforting, Darlene. Sorry about your girlfriend <3
Chansarkar Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 12:25 PM
This is magical for anyone facing loss. Thanks Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Dutta Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:16 PM
Congrats Kim to win top on yuor nice piece. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Thank you!
Smith Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Wonderful write Kim, congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Thank you!
May Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 12:16 PM
Great write and win Kim...Congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
Thank you!
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Kim, your poem deeply addresses the pain of the death of a loved one and the process to heal with such magical imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! A Fav and 7 for me. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs, Sandra!
Anderson Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Congratulations on your First placement in the contest. Well done! I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your words are wise, full of life and promise. Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Thanks so much, Emile!
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