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A BRUSH OF WARMTH
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          invade her mind and send her in overdrive

          the calming feeling of his hands ease her insides

          she freezes up and becomes  nieve
 
          like it was her first time

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        manipulates her tunnel of love

        jostles every being in her soul

        she shakes and quivers

        they become ONE

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        exploding into unparelled universes

        a new life is being created

        love has taken over

        a new dawn arises

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 7:52:00 AM
Very creative structure. Passionate write! ~Des Juan
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Date: 5/23/2009 7:47:00 AM
Yew really have the unique way of creating structure throughout your poems:)Not to mention they are very eye-catching and different and also passionate.The outlook you have on reproducing is fantastic!Keep it up
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Date: 5/22/2009 4:37:00 PM
beautiful, passionate, truthful. you never cease to amaze me! love it love it love it! <3 madison
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful reflection on the life-giving power of love, Brandy! The layout is very interesting, too.
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