It Seems

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                                         its seems along the way
                                 that i have lost my voice
                                             my tears are falling rain
                                   for this i have no choice
                                       i see a bright new star
                                           and i know that it is him
                                  a friend, son, brother, lover
                                             a boy, and a man



it seems that down this road
i have lost my thought
this is what i pay
for falling into distraught
i close my eyes and see
his warm and smiling face
what are we to do
now that he has gone away

                                                                it seems while walking this path
                                                            that i have lost my dreams
                                                                      i no longer do relax
                                                                  my tears echo my silent screams
                                                           a memory of his beautiful face
                                                                  is all i have left
                                                                     nothing can take his place
                                                                          nothing can replace his laugh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mcnaughton Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Wonderful poem. And thankyou for your kind comments. x
W Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:10 AM
this is a beautiful poem indeed something cant be all but to surreal ............always kate
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Rain this is true art and to me one of the best poems ive read in a while love the style of this poem Anything i say could not do justice to this great write
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