Mystic Rose Rose Poet Haiku

It Reflects Our Firmament El

if its water element  
then its all a big event 
freely given its God sent 
 
  
mirroring our firmament,  
liquid matter can't be bent
cuz its fluid it wont rend,
if its water, element.  
 
 


Contest Name: Elemental 
Sponsor: Charles Messina 
July 8, 2021

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Chris Conn September 19, 2021 at 4:54 AM liquid consciousness, matter bends my elbow straight, swimming in the stream,

Paula Goldsmith August 1, 2021 at 12:21 PM Congratulations on your win. What a creative write and picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 6:36 AM I really lik this poem, Mystic Rose, but your rhyme pattern was off or it would have placed higher. Great poetry! Congratulations on your winning poem...Charlie Mystic Rose Rose July 31, 2021 at 2:52 PM Thank you for my placement, glad you enjoyed it.

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:47 AM I learn much from your varying styles. This too is written in a very unique manner. This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Rama Balasubramanian July 8, 2021 at 7:02 AM Every word of this poem is superb. Firmament,bent, rend... Great thoughts and rhymes. A top winner for me Mystic Rose Rose July 8, 2021 at 7:35 AM Thank you Rama, for your comment, blessings :)

Victor Buhagiar July 7, 2021 at 11:30 PM Cute poem. It arrives at port in a very elementary manner. Best for a win. Hugs. Mystic Rose Rose July 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM Yes water is so essential to us, Victor,:)

Delice Arleen Skelly July 7, 2021 at 10:10 PM I like what you did with this element. it made for an enjoyable read....Delice Mystic Rose Rose July 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM Thank you Delice, all the best :)

Harry Horsman July 7, 2021 at 10:05 PM Clever poetry, Vie. Like it. Mystic Rose Rose July 8, 2021 at 7:34 AM Thank you Harry, keep well :)