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It Is Was On My Morning Stroll

it is was on my morning stroll i first noticed that common white house dress, pearl buttons busy in her garden sauntering on, a most common sight on subsequent passings my evaluations were she was not of any particular beauty yet, there was a numen behind that simple picket fence one that many times held me in a strange fascination her beauty was in a simplicity that left my inductive mind in a madhouse to understand so, i began, to steal my moments with her as an opportunity provided lost in the study of some neighbor's oak i became the ornithologist i was to take on many rolls no avenue was to be denied later i was to realize it was the grasp of that numen as Odysseus sirens i was born to succumb this ship would not pass in the night in the red sunset, a harbor found Benedick is ready to surrender and so my wish within did find a line to be man enough to balance a motorcycle and wear the dress of Emily a metaphor for abandoning the leather vest but if we must deal with the truth give freedom to dreams indeed i would forsake all the world could bestow on me, wealth, honor as with each line i dwell with her to turn back all of time and be the man that won the heart of Emily Dickinson OKC 5/22

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Date: 8/10/2023 5:58:00 PM
Dear Timothy, your enchanting pen spills introspection, emotion and imagery with dramatic and romantic beauty. I especially loved the use of the word "numen" and the revelation of your beloved Emily, a woman of no "particular beauty" (but great poetic talent) who held your fascination: "as with each line i dwell with her" - just lovely! A shining and soulful piece! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/11/2023 2:33:00 PM
thank you Susan....love that smile!!!
Date: 8/7/2023 5:33:00 AM
Much enjoyed the missives of this highly romantic poem, Timothy. Freedom to dreams indeed!
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/7/2023 10:27:00 AM
thank you.....i enjoy your quill immensely
Date: 8/7/2023 4:18:00 AM
…. Swept away by your admiration, heart , imagination, longing and reinvention into realms of infinite possibility dear Timothy ! Enraptured by your beckoning words . Hugs, Susan :)
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/7/2023 10:29:00 AM
yes i deeply admire Emily....for many reason but mostly she makes me think as opposed to to feeling...
Date: 8/7/2023 3:30:00 AM
WOW! Brilliant. Love this. A fave. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Timothy Ray
Date: 8/7/2023 10:31:00 AM
well to be honest....i did flirt quite a bit with Jane Austen

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