It Is Slam Time For You

Yo Yo Yo my name is Robin
And my poems are really rockin'
With me you can not compete
You will feel sad defeat
My writing skills can't be touched
All your words need to be flushed
Down the toilet with disgust
Listen to me you can trust
My opinion, you can't rhyme
It makes me sick everytime
Your words fail to connect
As all the ones you select
Should never be seen or heard
Your writing skills are absurd
It's useless to waste all your ink
Because your poems really STINK
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Telemacque Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 12:22 PM
nice writing, its swagerrific if thats even a word
Davis Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 9:20 PM
thanks so much I like that word. We are poets so we can make up words if we want LOL
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Hello Robin, so this is a slam. It is so different. Have a nice evening my friend.
Davis Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 10:43 PM
thank you so much for the great comment Have a nice weekend
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Wonderful slam, Robin - congratulations on your win! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Davis Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 10:42 PM
I appreciate the congrats and kind words Thank you
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 5:09 PM
many congrats Robin, and it is so wonderful to see you active on soup once more:-) hugs jan xx
Davis Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:58 PM
thank you for the kind words Sometimes I get brain freeze and need a break. then my brain defrosts and I can't stop writing LOL
Gentry Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjloyed.
Davis Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:58 PM
thank you for the congrats
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Robin. Well done.
Davis Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:56 PM
thank you very much for the congrats
Krutsinger Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 11:04 PM
What an uplifting poem Robin! Ha ha! So darling, cute, and daring. I love daring.
Davis Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 9:56 PM
thank you so much for the comment Yes, sometimes daring is fun
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