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It Is Slam Time For You

Yo Yo Yo my name is Robin And my poems are really rockin' With me you can not compete You will feel sad defeat My writing skills can't be touched All your words need to be flushed Down the toilet with disgust Listen to me you can trust My opinion, you can't rhyme It makes me sick everytime Your words fail to connect As all the ones you select Should never be seen or heard Your writing skills are absurd It's useless to waste all your ink Because your poems really STINK

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/7/2018 12:22:00 PM
nice writing, its swagerrific if thats even a word
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robin davis
Date: 7/7/2018 9:20:00 PM
thanks so much I like that word. We are poets so we can make up words if we want LOL
Date: 6/1/2018 5:21:00 PM
Hello Robin, so this is a slam. It is so different. Have a nice evening my friend.
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robin davis
Date: 6/1/2018 10:43:00 PM
thank you so much for the great comment Have a nice weekend
Date: 5/27/2018 12:23:00 AM
Wonderful slam, Robin - congratulations on your win! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
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robin davis
Date: 6/1/2018 10:42:00 PM
I appreciate the congrats and kind words Thank you
Date: 5/11/2018 5:09:00 PM
many congrats Robin, and it is so wonderful to see you active on soup once more:-) hugs jan xx
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robin davis
Date: 5/11/2018 9:58:00 PM
thank you for the kind words Sometimes I get brain freeze and need a break. then my brain defrosts and I can't stop writing LOL
Date: 5/8/2018 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjloyed.
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robin davis
Date: 5/11/2018 9:58:00 PM
thank you for the congrats
Date: 5/7/2018 9:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Robin. Well done.
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robin davis
Date: 5/11/2018 9:56:00 PM
thank you very much for the congrats
Date: 4/29/2018 11:04:00 PM
What an uplifting poem Robin! Ha ha! So darling, cute, and daring. I love daring.
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robin davis
Date: 5/11/2018 9:56:00 PM
thank you so much for the comment Yes, sometimes daring is fun