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It Is Not a Sad Song

He was not very good-looking He always criticized my cooking He liked wine a little bit too much And he also liked my touch He did not care about money Although occasionally he was so funny He had a cute dimple on his cheek He was so vulnerable, so weak He knew how to make me smile However, he made me sad once in a while Whenever I think about our faded love It resembles a wounded dove We were too much alike and too much young Our song has been sung But I do not want to make you sad For deep, deep inside me, I am glad Because we have spent together so many years Despite disappointment, despite tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/14/2013 8:37:00 AM
love this,, this is real life,,
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Date: 3/16/2013 6:47:00 AM
I like this poem a lot, bittersweet and touching, thanks for commenting on my work :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 4:50:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Like so many relationships some good and some bad..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:24:00 PM
A very sweet poem, my dear friend! Thank you for sharing! Huggs! xox
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Date: 3/12/2013 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful expression of true love and devotion. Sincerity reigns and you have captured my attention by your talented posts...... Jake
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Date: 2/27/2013 3:39:00 AM
Sounded like a nice friend. - A good poem Vesna, I like it a lot!!. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2013 3:36:00 AM
Love will conquer all.
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