Eddie Merritt Poet Villanelle

It Is Just a Poem

Don't stray, just stay where ur at
As the fragments from heaven are crumbling 
Just stay, don't stray where ur at

Eyes wide open and waiting but to numb to react
As the walls come down fumbling
Don't stray, just stay where ur at

Realigning the orbital rotational track
Every stride grants faith and humbling
Just stay, don't stray where ur at

Feeling around like blinded searching up a snack
Movements broad, wild, yeah already stumbling
Don't stray, just stay where ur at

Introspective thoughts are lacked
My chest is hungry, its rumbling
Just stay, don't stray where ur at

Uff being felt like dropped outa sack
I'm laid back, see thumbs bumbling
Don't stray, just stay where ur at
Just stay, don't stray where ur at.................Peace

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Carol Sunshine Brown December 12, 2011 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eddie. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2011 at 7:08 AM What a lyrical write with unforced refrains in the villanelle, Eddie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 8, 2011 at 4:44 AM peace back at ya eddie and this is clever and cool and interesting choice of language luv.. good luck if u enter in the Villanelle contest ..