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Don't stray, just stay where ur at As the fragments from heaven are crumbling Just stay, don't stray where ur at Eyes wide open and waiting but to numb to react As the walls come down fumbling Don't stray, just stay where ur at Realigning the orbital rotational track Every stride grants faith and humbling Just stay, don't stray where ur at Feeling around like blinded searching up a snack Movements broad, wild, yeah already stumbling Don't stray, just stay where ur at Introspective thoughts are lacked My chest is hungry, its rumbling Just stay, don't stray where ur at Uff being felt like dropped outa sack I'm laid back, see thumbs bumbling Don't stray, just stay where ur at Just stay, don't stray where ur at.................Peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/12/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Eddie. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:08:00 AM
What a lyrical write with unforced refrains in the villanelle, Eddie
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Date: 6/8/2011 4:44:00 AM
peace back at ya eddie and this is clever and cool and interesting choice of language luv.. good luck if u enter in the Villanelle contest ..
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