It Is Hard To Sleep

it is hard to sleep

little eyes are a peekin'...

santa comes tonight



  * Christmas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:28 PM
& smiles as I read that last line-- things just fell into place as I read it :)-- lovely Christmas write you've penned here, Dan :) -- nikko :)
Knop Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Ja, Dan, exitement when Santa comes around the corner! Lovely Haiku! Alles Gute, Gert
Mehta Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Very wonderful scene you have created with good images, Daniel
Neels Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Dan this one made me smile, you captured that scene perfectly ;)
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:24 AM
Truly a delight to recall those nights of anticipation, Daniel! Best wishes in Deb's contest. I responded to your soup mail. Love, Carolyn
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November 10, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Wondeful~ I will keep on my toes for this one" love it ( Lin~RA )
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