It Hurts

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It hurts, 
Don't you see,
Best friend I am,
But boyfriend I'll never be.

You can't see it,
Your oblivious,
Im falling so fast for you,
It should appear obvious.

When I'm falling down.
It's often cause of you,
But you turn that around,
Seems simple for you to do.

You lift my mood,
Then bring it down,
I get upset,
But you turn it around.

I shiver and shake,
I feel so cold,
I'm sick of this feeling,
It's getting old.

Then I'm happy,
And content,
Feels like from heaven,
You have been sent.

Your an angel it's true,
Beauty so deep,
My feelings for you,
Forever I keep.

Smile of a godess,
Eyes of a queen,
I feel oh so helpless,
Unlike anything I've ever seen.

Beauty so radiant,
Leaves me short of breath,
I try to move on,
But it feels like death,

I can't be the one,
Hurting all the time,
So please be my savior,
Simply be mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 1:41 PM
LOVE THE POEM
Trevino Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 6:28 AM
this is a really good poem
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September 14, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy your time on soup.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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September 13, 2010 at 5:58 AM
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