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It Hurts

3 It hurts,  Don't you see, Best friend I am, But boyfriend I'll never be. You can't see it, Your oblivious, Im falling so fast for you, It should appear obvious. When I'm falling down. It's often cause of you, But you turn that around, Seems simple for you to do. You lift my mood, Then bring it down, I get upset, But you turn it around. I shiver and shake, I feel so cold, I'm sick of this feeling, It's getting old. Then I'm happy, And content, Feels like from heaven, You have been sent. Your an angel it's true, Beauty so deep, My feelings for you, Forever I keep. Smile of a godess, Eyes of a queen, I feel oh so helpless, Unlike anything I've ever seen. Beauty so radiant, Leaves me short of breath, I try to move on, But it feels like death, I can't be the one, Hurting all the time, So please be my savior, Simply be mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/15/2024 5:51:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:41:00 PM
LOVE THE POEM
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Date: 9/16/2010 6:28:00 AM
this is a really good poem
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Date: 9/14/2010 12:20:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy your time on soup.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/13/2010 5:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kyle. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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