It Hurt Me Inside When I Saw You Crying In the Rain

You’ve been missing your smile and your inner glow
There death has affected you deep and brought great sorrow
The lord took their soul just like a thief
Now they’re in heaven so take comfort in that relief

Your loss was great and you’ll never be the same
Don’t forget them and be true to their name
Your face was full of stress and incredible pain
It hurt me inside when I saw you crying in the rain

Your suffering makes my teeth chatter
I try to cheer you up but it doesn’t seem to matter
If you need me for support please just call
I’ll be there by your side through it all

Your loss was great and you’ll never be the same
Don’t forget them and be true to their name
Your face was full of stress and incredible pain
It hurt me inside when I saw you crying in the rain

I’ll listen close so you can share
I know this is a heavy burden to bear
Take the time to heal and know you have a friend
You’ll see them some day at your life’s end

Your loss was great and you’ll never be the same
Don’t forget them and be true to their name
Your face was full of stress and incredible pain
It hurt me inside when I saw you crying in the rain

I know when they were taken you thought it wasn’t right
But they exist now eternally in perpetual light
Even though never again can you give them you love
Take solace in the fact that they watch over you from the clouds above

Your loss was great and you’ll never be the same
Don’t forget them and be true to their name
Your face was full of stress and incredible pain
It hurt me inside when I saw you crying in the rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 24, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Beautiful...what more needs to be said absolutely... I feel every word and I love when a poem does that to me. I'm a fan. ~Beloved Faizah
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