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It Happened One Night

IT HAPPENED ONE NIGHT Not a knockout to begin with Dubious the juices beneath her skin Hortense Winesap was a last resort (after all the callers had needs) She sat around the house Feeling bruised and unwanted Hoping every knock on the door Would lead to a last of the sweet packages Would lead to her needed fulfillment But finally the late traffic stopped Poor Hortense was left all alone All sad and faded-red A big truck pulled-up outside Shook her shook her off the table She rolled onto the bare floor Split wide open – The forgotten apple

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2013 10:54:00 AM
Daver, it is incredible. I finally found one of your poems I have not read yet. This one really had me scratching my head. I didn't know if she was a poor girl with no date, a prostitute or WHAT? Then when I got to the last line, I reread it and realized what she was. Just a bad apple. hahaha. or maybe not really bad but just fading!!
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:13:00 PM
I heard about a bad apple that only liked sailors and did not like marines. They said she was gravy for the Navy, but rotten to the Corps. Vince
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:43:00 PM
Hey Daver, thnx for the comments on my piece..I appreciate it. ....Later, Jimmy
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:26:00 PM
You're too much, Daver. Here you had me feeling sorry for poor Hortense and I had images of the poor dear rolling off a table onto a bare floor! Shame on me -- you fooled me more than once. I should be on to you by now, Grumpy! Very funny poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 2:30:00 PM
Winesap Apples those luscious slightly tart crisp lop sided apples..One of my favorites but I don't see them anymore here in the stores...Of course, you are not really talking about an apple...I enjoyed the reading of your work..I am glad that I found this one this eve...Thanks for reading my latest write..A lady that goes to the church that we go to has had a reoccurance of cancer..She is now waiting to get the Pet scan to see if the treatment killed all the cancer..She has stage four cancer.SK
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Date: 9/28/2010 11:10:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Daver. Been awile since I have seen you post or did I miss them? Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 11:10:00 AM
The title says it all Daver, something has to happen sooner or later, glad they never had the chance to get rot.. Bruises happen to us all, glad the split was soon discovered i suppose, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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