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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park

Inside wrists of sweet perfume 
Middle notes of love's exhume 
Bollard neon lights ablaze 
Dreamy lovers lost in haze

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Susan Ashley Date: 9/7/2023 6:02:00 PM Dear Vie, a lovely romantic verse so wonderfully rhythmic. I adore every line of this poetic gem! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/8/2023 3:09:00 AM Glad you enjoyed the add one, hope its well received Susan, God bless and thanks for the visit :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/7/2023 7:28:00 AM - A fragrant sweet kiss at Lover's Park ... romantic poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM Thanks Anne, hope your keeping well, sending smiles your way

Hiya Sharma Date: 9/7/2023 3:41:00 AM "Inside wrists of sweet perfume" That's truly sufficient to create an enchanting ambience for the reader.. "Middle notes of love's exhume" Wow.. "Neon lights ablaze", "dreamy lovers lost in haze" The rhymes are so elegant here, flowing so beautifully in the romantic aura.. A purely beautiful take for the contest dear :) Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM Glad you enjoyed it Hiya, have a blessed day

Regina Mcintosh Date: 9/7/2023 3:32:00 AM Lovely writing. I enjoyed, Wish you a win. God bless you sweet friend. love, Gina Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM so nice to see you here, thanks for the comment dear Regina.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/7/2023 1:24:00 AM Your addition is of excellent quality. So long as I'm inside I love the sound of the rain. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/8/2023 3:07:00 AM Me too Victor, I love the pitter patter drops on my window pane, much love, Vie

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/6/2023 2:43:00 PM Beautifully woven theme in your stanza complements the first stanza given--to cohesively form the whole of love emotions. Nicely done, Vienna. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 9/6/2023 5:16:00 PM so glad you felt it meshed well, Vijay, thank you for your gentle visit :)