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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Inside wrists of sweet perfume Middle notes of love's exhume Bollard neon lights ablaze Dreamy lovers lost in haze

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Susan Ashley

Date: 9/7/2023 6:02:00 PM

Dear Vie, a lovely romantic verse so wonderfully rhythmic. I adore every line of this poetic gem! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/8/2023 3:09:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed the add one, hope its well received Susan, God bless and thanks for the visit :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2023 7:28:00 AM

- A fragrant sweet kiss at Lover's Park ... romantic poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne, hope your keeping well, sending smiles your way

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/7/2023 3:41:00 AM

"Inside wrists of sweet perfume" That's truly sufficient to create an enchanting ambience for the reader.. "Middle notes of love's exhume" Wow.. "Neon lights ablaze", "dreamy lovers lost in haze" The rhymes are so elegant here, flowing so beautifully in the romantic aura.. A purely beautiful take for the contest dear :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Hiya, have a blessed day

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2023 3:32:00 AM

Lovely writing. I enjoyed, Wish you a win. God bless you sweet friend. love, Gina

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 AM

so nice to see you here, thanks for the comment dear Regina.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/7/2023 1:24:00 AM

Your addition is of excellent quality. So long as I'm inside I love the sound of the rain.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/8/2023 3:07:00 AM

Me too Victor, I love the pitter patter drops on my window pane, much love, Vie

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2023 2:43:00 PM

Beautifully woven theme in your stanza complements the first stanza given--to cohesively form the whole of love emotions. Nicely done, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/6/2023 5:16:00 PM

so glad you felt it meshed well, Vijay, thank you for your gentle visit :)