Mystic Rose Rose Poet Verse

It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park

Inside wrists of sweet perfume 
Middle notes of love's exhume 
Bollard neon lights ablaze 
Dreamy lovers lost in haze

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Susan Ashley September 7, 2023 at 6:02 PM Dear Vie, a lovely romantic verse so wonderfully rhythmic. I adore every line of this poetic gem! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan Mystic Rose Rose September 8, 2023 at 3:09 AM Glad you enjoyed the add one, hope its well received Susan, God bless and thanks for the visit :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2023 at 7:28 AM - A fragrant sweet kiss at Lover's Park ... romantic poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs Mystic Rose Rose September 8, 2023 at 3:08 AM Thanks Anne, hope your keeping well, sending smiles your way

Hiya Sharma September 7, 2023 at 3:41 AM "Inside wrists of sweet perfume" That's truly sufficient to create an enchanting ambience for the reader.. "Middle notes of love's exhume" Wow.. "Neon lights ablaze", "dreamy lovers lost in haze" The rhymes are so elegant here, flowing so beautifully in the romantic aura.. A purely beautiful take for the contest dear :) Mystic Rose Rose September 8, 2023 at 3:08 AM Glad you enjoyed it Hiya, have a blessed day

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2023 at 3:32 AM Lovely writing. I enjoyed, Wish you a win. God bless you sweet friend. love, Gina Mystic Rose Rose September 8, 2023 at 3:08 AM so nice to see you here, thanks for the comment dear Regina.

Victor Buhagiar September 7, 2023 at 1:24 AM Your addition is of excellent quality. So long as I'm inside I love the sound of the rain. Mystic Rose Rose September 8, 2023 at 3:07 AM Me too Victor, I love the pitter patter drops on my window pane, much love, Vie

Vijay Pandit September 6, 2023 at 2:43 PM Beautifully woven theme in your stanza complements the first stanza given--to cohesively form the whole of love emotions. Nicely done, Vienna. Mystic Rose Rose September 6, 2023 at 5:16 PM so glad you felt it meshed well, Vijay, thank you for your gentle visit :)