It Happened On a Rainy Night

"Foggy mists engulfed the bright
 When raindrops fell throughout the night
 The lampposts glowed at midnights dark
 When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park"

Waves gently lapped the shore nearby
 as we embraced, my love and I.
 My fingers touched my sweetheart’s hair.
 It felt like silk, so soft and fair.

Stanza 1 by Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:14 AM
this is beautiful, well done xxx
Downing  Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:58 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win :)
Daniel Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:46 AM
Romantic and dreamy, Andrea, congratulations:)
Chunn Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Another winner Andrea....congratulations on your beautiful verse.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 12:40 AM
lovely xx
Blodgett Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Beautifully sensuous! Lonna
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Dear Andrea, romantic imagery flows beautifully on your rhythmic verse. Smooth as silk! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Edmonds  Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Lovely Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:19 AM
So beautiful especially those last two lines, so well articulated and romantic. Brilliant write this is. Well deserved win. Congratulations
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Beautiful and softly sensual, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Narain Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Nice addendum to a beautiful poem,
Luthra Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 6:36 AM
So beautiful
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