It Happened On a Rainy Night

"Foggy mists engulfed the bright
 When raindrops fell throughout the night
 The lampposts glowed at midnights dark
 When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park"

Waves gently lapped the shore nearby
 as we embraced, my love and I.
 My fingers touched my sweetheart’s hair.
 It felt like silk, so soft and fair.

Stanza 1 by Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/12/2023 3:14:00 AM
this is beautiful, well done xxx
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Date: 9/11/2023 8:58:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/11/2023 1:46:00 AM
Romantic and dreamy, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 9/9/2023 7:34:00 PM
Another winner Andrea....congratulations on your beautiful verse.
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Date: 9/9/2023 12:40:00 AM
lovely xx
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Date: 9/8/2023 6:52:00 PM
Beautifully sensuous! Lonna
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:07:00 PM
Dear Andrea, romantic imagery flows beautifully on your rhythmic verse. Smooth as silk! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/8/2023 11:25:00 AM
Lovely Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle
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Date: 9/8/2023 11:19:00 AM
So beautiful especially those last two lines, so well articulated and romantic. Brilliant write this is. Well deserved win. Congratulations
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Date: 9/8/2023 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful and softly sensual, Andrea! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 9/6/2023 10:05:00 AM
Nice addendum to a beautiful poem,
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Date: 9/6/2023 6:36:00 AM
So beautiful
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