It Happened On a Rainy Night

It Happened On A Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park

With ravenous beauty so wise
That love painted was no surprise
They with melded hearts therein chose
A mellow moon's glorious pose
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Bowring Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Simply gorgeous dear friend. What a sublime verse. Very romantic Robert. ‘They with melded hearts therein chose’ ‘ A mellow moon’s glorious pose’. Delightful. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
Lindley Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, my good friend. It was not chosen for a win but the contest had many really good poems entered. God bless you..
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:12 AM
Your rhymes are so sublime, and I absolutely love the way your words flow. And “ ravenous” is a very fitting word for the imagery you’ve painted here. My fave line here should be “ a mellow moons glorious pose” how stunning and soul warming is that. With a beauty like that love painted is no surprise, i agree. Brilliant write this is. Goodluck for the contest
Lindley Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 3:58 AM
Thank you very much, my friend. I felt the urge and that popped right on out. God bless you..
Situation Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:20 PM
A very romantic discription.
Lindley Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, my friend. Romance was in the air. God bless.
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