It Happened On a Rainy Night

Although the rain then turned to hail,
they  kissed until the moon was pale;
and he was found by morning's light,
alone, all drained of blood and white.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 3:22 AM
This verse is so well written Jack with great impact especially that dark twist to conclude. Loved it! Thank you for sharing.
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:27 AM
A man's downfall orchestrated by a femme fatal in disguise. I'll watch out for her :) Congrats on yet another win, my friend! // paul
Chunn Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Yikes! A bit darker view of poetic love. Congrats on the win.
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:26 PM
Dear Jack, back with congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. I adore the dark turn of this romance. It's a pleasure to share to podium with you my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lawless Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Jack, Edgar Allen eat y'er heart out....
Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Dear Jack, a poetic plot twist for sure! I adore the rhythm and rhymes of your imaginative gem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Situation Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:11 AM
A great line in a chapter of a book.
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Leave it to you to bring in the vampires or Dracula. LOL..Thanks for sharing. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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