It Happened On a Rainy Night

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September 3, 2023

Contest : It Happened On A Rainy Night-Collaboaration

Sponsored by : Charles Messina

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“Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night 
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark 
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park”

Silent lovers entwined in sensuous rapture
The thrill of fusion they desired to capture 
Melody of love resonated in rain-rinsed wind
The gleam of dream melted miasma of mind

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Deb M

Date: 9/3/2023 7:09:00 AM

Lovely worded poem Roy! Debx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/3/2023 10:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Deb for your appreciation.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/3/2023 6:38:00 AM

I love your rhymes here and the flow: you are truly a very talented poet. And the wat youve woven words is profound. I especially love “ melody of love resonated in rain rinsed wind. How creative, love those alliterations! Goodluck for the contest

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/3/2023 10:50:00 PM

Thank you so much. I am humbled by your gracious comment.

It Happened On a Rainy Night

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