It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright 
When raindrops fell throughout the night
The lampposts glowed at midnights dark
When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park

The kiss a burning flame so hot
The rain could dim it, not a jot
The lamppost shone through mist and rain
Our hearts entwined with lovers pain



collab poetry contest.
Mandy Tams GG
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 6:13 AM
I like how you described the kiss as a flame in this lovely verse Mandy, best wishes
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Hi Joseph, thanks for reading and commenting, the right kiss is hot you gotta admit.
Bowring Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:14 PM
Love this Mandy. So well written. So romantic. You depicted the scene so beautifully poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Thank you x
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:54 PM
Oh I love this, Mandy. Too bad it couldn't have been worked into the collaboration
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Thankyou Andrea xx
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