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It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park The kiss a burning flame so hot The rain could dim it, not a jot The lamppost shone through mist and rain Our hearts entwined with lovers pain collab poetry contest. Mandy Tams GG

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Date: 9/22/2023 4:16:00 PM
Sweet take Mandy. Yes, love involves a measure of pain. But oh the bliss!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/26/2023 1:00:00 AM
oh yes, Tom. xx
Date: 9/14/2023 6:13:00 AM
I like how you described the kiss as a flame in this lovely verse Mandy, best wishes
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/15/2023 1:39:00 AM
Hi Joseph, thanks for reading and commenting, the right kiss is hot you gotta admit.
Date: 9/12/2023 10:14:00 PM
Love this Mandy. So well written. So romantic. You depicted the scene so beautifully poetic. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :):)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/15/2023 1:39:00 AM
Thank you x
Date: 9/11/2023 8:54:00 PM
Oh I love this, Mandy. Too bad it couldn't have been worked into the collaboration
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/15/2023 1:39:00 AM
Thankyou Andrea xx

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