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Date: 18/09/2023

It Happened On A  Misty Morning - Collaboration Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Charles Messina

“Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone” I become nostalgic, whenever I think of it Unmindful of surroundings, not even a bit Like butterflies, in full romantic mood There, with each other, we were glued Stanza 1 by Charles Messina

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Date: 11/2/2023 8:39:00 AM
Dear Srinivas, your lovely verse captures the magic of romantic nostalgia with wistful beauty. A wonderful addition to Charlie's verse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/2/2023 4:27:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Srinivas. Love the last line. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my contest! Thanks for entering...Charlie
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Date: 10/5/2023 9:05:00 AM
ahhh those precious moments we cling to...you bring a bigger point to their greater value, the aid us in clinging to love when all the world seems asunder...great poem, loved it
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Date: 9/22/2023 3:59:00 AM
Nostalgia can be a moving experience. Ah, romance!
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:37:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic Srinivas, well done… Belle
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