It Glows Inside

The fog settles over the snow
Icy rain falls, no-where to go
Everything is close, can’t see far
Shields of white and gray, set the bar
Of what to see, this winter day
But dampness cannot find a way
To reach the heart, that glows inside
Waiting for weather to subside

Heidi Sands

11/25/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 1, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Beautiful write Heidi..
Sands Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment on this :)
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November 27, 2018 at 7:08 PM
Love the poem ...love the title, Heidi. Very keen pastoral perception, as your pen is wont to ink say. Mighty fine poetry, my dear friend. Love and joy always.
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November 28, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you very much Freddie. I hope you are well :)
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November 26, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thanks for liking my Haiku... Love your poem. Snow in any form even with sleet is warmth for the heart. Bob
Sands Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Thank you Robert and you are also welcome :)
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November 26, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Hello Dear Heidi, This one is a marvelous rhyme, and a true joy to read!! The title for your rhyme is quite excellent and most appropriate for your theme and verse. (BTW, Thanks very much for your recent comments on my poetry, and a couple of them that my wife and I had worked on together. Your thoughts are always most appreciated!!) Best Wishes, Gary
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November 26, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thank you so much Gary. I appreciate your feedback and you are welcome :)
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November 26, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Yes that sounds like the weather we are having at the moment. Nicely written can relate to this weather. love phyl
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November 26, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Thank you Phyllis :)
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November 26, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Wonderfully written Heidi. We had nice weather this weekend but I am sure it will change soon, though not a heavy duty winter like you are probably experiencing. Your poem is beautiful, no matter how bad the weather is outside, if the heart is glowing that is all that matters
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November 26, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Chris. Yes, we are getting a foot of snow tonight into tomorrow . Have a nice day :)
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