Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

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Entered, January 9, 2024, in the Contest, "Self Portrait," 
Sponsor, Jaymee Thomas

~5th Place~

It Fills Up My Soul

Born in New York of Italian descent-
from childhood on- lasting still all these years,
Deep in my soul live the sounds of lament-
The drama of romance, fear, death, and tears.

The power, the movements, fill up my soul
Like thunder that roars to shake up the night;
So vibrant and flowing, lost in the role,
I listen to grasp each note with delight. 

Emotional voices strike at my heart,
I'm filled with a depth I cannot explain-
The beauty, the sadness in every part
Bring stories to life that stir inner pain.

Yes, opera is a big part of me; 
My favorites played again and again-
Puccini, Bizet and those of Verdi;
Of Tosca, Carmen, and best, La Boheme.

With musical dramas of life and death-
The singers stir feelings with every word.
Strong voices mingle to deepen my breath;
Emotions rise with each aria heard.

Born in New York of Italian descent-
My family loved and nurtured this art;
played records at home- with happy hours spent
at the Met- where opera lifted my heart.

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Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2024 at 8:00 PM Congratulations, Sandra, on a lovely write. The romance of your heart shouts in poignancy.

Jaymee Thomas January 13, 2024 at 2:30 PM This is so beautifully written with excellent word choices and a glimpse into your roots. I particularly like the opera imagery and specific mention of your ancestry and how you were introduced to the soul-moving music. For me, I would have liked you to zoom in a little more into a moment in time with your family - what were the smells and sights that first time a record played? Who was there? What did they say about it that you agreed or disagreed with? You have my interest!

Daniel Henry Rodgers January 9, 2024 at 6:14 PM Sandra, your poem beautifully encapsulates the profound impact of opera in your life. Your vivid imagery and heartfelt expression illuminate the depth of emotion that this art form evokes. The way you intertwine your personal connection with opera, from childhood memories to the power it holds over your soul, is truly captivating. A symphony of emotions painted with eloquence! - Blessings, Daniel Daniel Henry Rodgers January 13, 2024 at 5:12 PM Congratulations on your win, Sandra. It was well deserved!

Sara Kendrick January 9, 2024 at 1:47 PM Ahhh!! Opera is not a favorite of mine, but sometimes I do hear one that I like. Thank you for sharing a little about yourself with us. Sara K