It Feels Just Right

When we first met we danced all night
I held you and swayed you away so light
The music was romantic for you and me
That night together we set our love free

The years have continued to feel just right
When we dance together and I hold you tight
I remember the first promise I made on that night
To love you forever and it still feels just right

So here I am standing so close to you
And I ask you to dance now and to say I love you
It’s the song that was playing that first night
And we are together and it feel’s just right. 

© Paul Warren Poetry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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March 22, 2023 at 4:51 AM
Not only a good poet but a lucky one as well:) Nice job, Paul.
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March 21, 2023 at 9:44 PM
Beautiful sentiment Paul. Lasting love is a wonderous thing. Your poem speaks volumes, and I love it.
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