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It Feels Just Right

When we first met we danced all night I held you and swayed you away so light The music was romantic for you and me That night together we set our love free The years have continued to feel just right When we dance together and I hold you tight I remember the first promise I made on that night To love you forever and it still feels just right So here I am standing so close to you And I ask you to dance now and to say I love you It’s the song that was playing that first night And we are together and it feel’s just right. © Paul Warren Poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/22/2023 4:51:00 AM
Not only a good poet but a lucky one as well:) Nice job, Paul.
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:44:00 PM
Beautiful sentiment Paul. Lasting love is a wonderous thing. Your poem speaks volumes, and I love it.
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