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Born into this world naked and alone I'll leave no mark, not even a gravestone. In this reality, time is finite, and I am here to experience light. Some souls leave footprints for time to erase, but most blink out without leaving a trace. No one will remember that I was here, that I laughed, got angry, or shed a tear. Birth offers a spiritual being senses, like feeling, smelling, and seeing. And the concept of emotions and thought are corporeal, so they must be taught. There is much more to life than birth and death, and it doesn't end with your final breath. (Rhyme) 5/3/2021

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Date: 5/6/2021 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful! Really enjoyed this one! Congrats on your win, Emile
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Date: 5/7/2021 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate your wonderful comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/6/2021 3:00:00 PM
I like this, Emile! So well written. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/7/2021 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/3/2021 12:20:00 PM
So true my friend - so true! We have been shone an amazing future. All is not bleak or lost. But, I have to, in one way disagree, for your words have a life of their own. Every time you pen your eloquent wisdom, you leave a living legacy for the future. Blessings to you!
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Date: 5/3/2021 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Sam, you honor me my friend, and as always, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

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