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Everybody knows IT. From the Addams' Family show. That blond haired creature. Long locks that flowed. IT moved like the Darleks. Trying to kill Dr. Who. Which was front, which was back? No one ever knew. IT reminds me of my daughters, with identical coloured hair. If they were joined together, they were IT I swear.

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Date: 12/30/2017 5:24:00 PM
gosh, I am surprised if this one did not win. I REALLY like this, Jean. a LOT! (miss those days of watching that tv show even though we only had 3 or 4 channels to choose from)
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Jean Murray
Date: 12/30/2017 5:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea. I had a photo of my two daughters together to explain what I meant but I see it has gone. I like it as well. We still all laugh when we remember those schooldays. Thank you for saying it deserved a place.
Date: 12/10/2017 8:04:00 AM
- A funny writing, Jean - Two lovely girl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 9:31:00 AM
They are now 24 and 21 Anna-Lise. Two lovely women.
Date: 12/7/2017 2:18:00 PM
oh what a fun poem Jean and they sure are beautiful girls:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2017 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Jan. I was hoping you would stumble across this one as I knew you would enjoy it.
Date: 12/7/2017 12:08:00 PM
ha! funny poem, jean, but you have some beautiful daughters!
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Date: 12/7/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. They are beautiful, my little darlings.
Date: 12/7/2017 8:13:00 AM
Now they wont be happy you said that! lol.
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Date: 12/7/2017 10:36:00 AM
I often teased them about it at the time Silent. I had to upload their photo to Facebook before I could transfer it here. At least I didn't leave it there....

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