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It. It rode the wind that swept the vale. It scaled the mountains high. It conquered everything it saw, cruel raider from the sky. The screaming hordes before it fell their bodies torn and crushed. It tossed aside the remnant flesh from which all life had gushed. It crossed the plains from east to west It passed from north to south. Cold scorn surged out before it as the spite spewed from its mouth. A devastating trail of death All hope of salvage gone. The elements in all their rage ensured the war was won. Indomitable spirit. Man has always faced his plight. Whatever nature hurls at him He'll turn around and fight. Man will not be crushed underfoot or trampled down to dirt. In time he'll resurrect his world. The years will heal the hurt. © Copyright 2007 ~Sue Carroll~

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Date: 3/6/2017 5:42:00 PM
If ever man needed that indomitable spirit it is surely now., Love you work Sue from working together for a short time. Look forward to reading more. God Bless. D.
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Date: 7/21/2015 1:49:00 AM
it, is an awesome poem Sue, good ending... :), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/20/2015 2:13:00 PM
Hi Sue, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2015 1:56:00 PM
- A great poem ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Sue :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:28:00 AM
A deep poem that goes beyond the literal. A well-deserved 7+!
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:11:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem. I thought it was very true. thank you for sharing.
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