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In a drift along the shore Stuck and lost in paradise; Only me and my Love and a guitar Letting the rhythm hypnotize; As we sing an Ocean song Trying to create a rhythm; Eventually the notes are complete, Destiny an isolated song.

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Date: 10/11/2013 9:54:00 AM
Fantastic vibe! I concur, killer last line. =)
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Date: 10/10/2013 12:57:00 PM
"destiny an isolated song", love that line. Keep up the good work...TAH
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