Isolated

In a drift along the shore
Stuck and lost in paradise;
Only me and my Love and a guitar
Letting the rhythm hypnotize;
As we sing an Ocean song 
Trying to create a rhythm;
Eventually  the notes are complete,
Destiny an isolated song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Fantastic vibe! I concur, killer last line. =)
Hill Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 12:57 PM
"destiny an isolated song", love that line. Keep up the good work...TAH
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