Timothy Brumley Poet Senryu

Islands

Tears shed from lost love

                             Flood the inlets to our hearts...

                                                                 Creating islands.



                                                                  Timothy I. Brumley

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Elizabeth Wesley September 18, 2011 at 6:06 PM Yes, I see what you mean. It takes only a few words and a bright mind to create a profound statement and you have done just that.

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2010 at 10:19 AM I do love how you think! It was so nice finding out more about you here thru your little poems. I better get to something else now. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta June 11, 2010 at 6:23 PM Nice one - ceating islands into the heart. enjoyed it

Carolyn Devonshire June 11, 2010 at 3:55 PM Very moving image of tears separating people's hearts, creating islands of isolation, Timothy. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2010 at 11:57 AM Love the meaning you put into this one, "creating islands"- lost love can do wonders to us, enjoyed this write... P.D.

Chuck Keys June 11, 2010 at 11:55 AM sad, but true. alot said in a few words. thanks, chuck