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Island Spirit

Island Spirit

Palm trees are swaying island style
Within the gentle trade wind's flow,
As Egrets glide on salty air—
Then land where verdant grasses grow.
Breathe in sweet scents of tuberose
And let fine mist caress your face,
Dive deep into aqua waters—
Become enchanted with this place.

Let your eyes consume the beauty,
Let rhythmic music soothe your mind.
You'll feel the aloha spirit—
A kinder people you won't find.
Go hiking in hillside forests,
There are no bears or snakes that hide,
Just waterfalls you'll find waiting,
That flow toward the ocean side.

In the distance whales are breaching,
Humpbacks with little calves in tow.
They share waters with the dolphins,
And green sea turtles down below.
Can you hear paradise calling?
Whispering your name at sunrise,
To later bask on pearly sands.
Swaying hula hips at moonrise,

Coaxing you to join in the dance.
Exotic Mai Tai in your hands,
Sweet flower leis caress your neck,
Come investigate our islands,
And board on wild waves at surfside,
Cast your cold and cares to the breeze.
Sailing out on sunset cruises—
Take homeward bound warm memories.

6/20/20


Poem of the Day at Poetry Soup January 17, 2015 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Walker Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 7:04 AM
Connie, Very Vivid. Beautifully penned. Makes me want to return to the islands.
Ray Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 10:20 AM
Palm trees, Egrets, Humpbacks, Green sea turtles and you,,, = others who read this poem are in one piece of memory in our time which never ends.. I'm glad I visited this beautiful island in my vision.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 10:47 PM
What a lovely compliment you honor me with Kohava. It is very nice to meet you. I will visit your page. Thank you for your kindness. Aloha and Blessings xxoo
Staton Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Beautifully written. Love the accompanying picture.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 10:32 AM
my last response to this one was about two years ago. it remains your number one and is making me jealous again not to live where you live.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 11:58 AM
PS has it as my number one poem Andrea, but actually Tranquility has 8 more faves than Island Spirit. I am glad you like this one though. I have been getting my house in order for Thansksgiving that will be at our home this year. I will try to post another poem soon.thanks Andrea xxoo
Shaw Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Welina Mai Aloha - Not only are you a wonderful "Translator" Connie but a wonderful "Holiday Rep" as well - he he he - You have sold "Hawali" to me and thanks to you I am now on its "Imaginary" beach basking in the sun - Lovely - Indiana x x x
Duncan Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Lovely reminds me of those shows I watch. Buying the island and beachfront properties. Glad you liked my Light Of Angels :)
Dew Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 2:07 AM
Enchanting and so eloquent! My my! :D
Williams Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 11:48 PM
Another wonderful poem of Hawai Connie, your island paradise. You have done full justice to its beauty. A7++
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 6:10 PM
did you know this was your number one best poem, Connie? You should take it to a tourist office of Hawaii!! sure do wish I could be there with you this winter!
Breedt Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Hi Comnie make me wish I vould be there just to wash away the dangers and fear of this place. It will take at least two years to become human again. You write so well I could feel the waves and the pineapple drinks and floral necklace thingy. Are the girls nice there? I could so just go there.we have all the mambas and cobras here
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Where are you located Jannie? Thank you for your very nice comments on my poems. I have been swamped with company and caring for my granddaughter so I haven't had much time to answer mail or make comments. Have a wonderful year! ; )
Dalei Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Connie, This is called poem. Superb. Very brilliant piece, well penned every word. Loved it. A7 & fav..............//Manmath
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Thank you so much Manmath. I think you made my day by giving this poem a fave! I appreciate your lovely comment too! ; ) Blessings, Connie
Sheaffer Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Gorgeous place and well written. Wish I could visit. So attractive, especially no snakes.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thank you very much Elisabeth. You can swim in the sea in winter here because the water temperature is not cold. Sending you a tropical breeze! ; )
Kroll Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 8:10 AM
I love your beautiful island. You have captured it so lovingly. Alas, we did not have much time to just meander and take in the ocean's breezes -- too many sightseeing trips. Would love to return. Kathy
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 3:53 AM
Walking on the beach hand in hand at twilight just as the sun sets...nothing finer! Thank you Kathleen. ; )
Fleming Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:43 PM
I am very pleased for you, Connie. This poem is well worthy to be included in the "Best 100". Your friend always. :) john.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Thank you John. I can't really spend enough time here like others. It is very nice to have a poem on that list. It is always nice to hear from you. Cheers, Connie ; )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations, Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Thank you Janis. I was happy I could use an older poem. ; )
Scars Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Connie, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Thank you very much for my high placement luloo. I appreciate you giving us a chance to share older poems as entries. ; )
A   Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:00 PM
Connie, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Awesome Connie! Congrats on being Andrea's fave!
De La Croes Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, for this swayingly beautiful poem, Connie!
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:15 PM
dropping back again Connie I want to get on a plane right now:-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Connie, a wonderful poem with great flow. I can see why its a fave..congrats :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 12:04 PM
oh how I wish I were there right now!!! this is gonna stay on top 100 if I can help it. FAVE!!
Fleming Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 11:43 AM
I am glad to see this poem in the top 100, Connie...it deserves to be. Such a warm, enchanting picture of paradise you have painted - Wonderful! My very best regards, Connie. :-) john
May Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 10:36 PM
You captured the island vibes beautifully in this great write Connie...Congrats on your win
A  Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Hello Connie This happens to be Linda's pick, we picked two numbers on the top poems not including first place. Congratulations, on your third place win. SKAT
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