Caleah Buil Poet List

Island Breeze

I hear and see:
Hot pavement, 
Green house,
Boardwalk,
The sound of children's talk
The sun,
watching all the fun
Palm trees
Shifting in the breeze
Blue sky
Green leaves
Bougainvillea trees,
Red and vibrant
That's how you can tell you're on an island

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Timothy Hicks November 10, 2014 at 2:29 PM I seem to have missed this one. Nice descriptions of an island scene - you make me envious for I've never been on a tropical island! But I have biked on the beach, at the Oregon coast... that's pretty fun :) Caleah Buil December 2, 2014 at 12:38 PM Oh, you'd love it! And see, I wouldn't mind visiting Oregon, we should trade. ;) Thanks for the comment!!

Carol Eastman August 15, 2013 at 1:00 PM Your list form worked well here. Caleah Buil September 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM Thanks! I wasn't sure how it would be, but it came out better than I thought it would. :)

Sara Kendrick August 14, 2013 at 2:32 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed your list..Sara Caleah Buil September 1, 2013 at 2:04 PM Aww Thank you so much Sara! Have a great Labor Day weekend!

Sean L Sanders August 1, 2013 at 8:46 AM WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Caleah Buil August 2, 2013 at 3:01 PM I'm guessing you liked it. Hehehe ;)

Poet Tacito August 1, 2013 at 7:58 AM A new poem from the "Bull"! =D That's what I'm calling you now. Accept it. Embrace it. =) This was awesome! I love me some walks on the beach. Playful sounds of waves & smells of "bad for your body, good for your soul" food. Count me in! Nicely done! Caleah Buil August 2, 2013 at 3:03 PM LOL!!! I take no bull, I like it, I have "embraced" :P Oh I know, while I was in Nassau I had me some chicken in the bag...dang, I'm on vacation, I'm not going to think of my waistline. Haha! Thanks for your comments as always. :D