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Island

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Micropoetry contest

Ink Empress

Island Soft sand beaches touch the rolling aqua waves Dense grove of coconut palms reach for the sky

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:42:00 AM

Dear Oliver, youv described this beautiful island, in such a creative manner! I see through your word weaving, coconut palms, and aqua waves! Stunning take on the prompt, thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/8/2025 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Ink. I appreciate your comments

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:41:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Island :) - hugs

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/8/2025 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2025 7:53:00 PM

Fantastic 17 words. Your tropical paradise poem portrays the beauty of nature and the stillness of seaside locations. Also highlights tropical landscapes' natural aspects, mainly land-sea interaction, with soft sandy beaches and coconut trees.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/1/2025 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Sotto.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/29/2025 4:43:00 PM

Nice, soft sand complements a perfect day. Your micro poem says a lot.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/29/2025 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Hilda

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2025 11:48:00 AM

A wonderful "Island" write. Few words with much said. Right now, I wish I was on a beach. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away...............

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/29/2025 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Paula. Dont we all:).

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2025 8:21:00 AM

- A nice picture of your island, Oliver :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 4/29/2025 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Annr-Lise.