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Ink Empress

 

Island

Island
Soft sand beaches touch the rolling aqua waves Dense grove of coconut palms reach for the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May 8, 2025 at 4:42 AM
Dear Oliver, youv described this beautiful island, in such a creative manner! I see through your word weaving, coconut palms, and aqua waves! Stunning take on the prompt, thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light
Mckeithan Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 5:22 AM
Thanks Ink. I appreciate your comments
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 1:41 AM
- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Island :) - hugs
Mckeithan Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 5:22 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise.
Poet Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Fantastic 17 words. Your tropical paradise poem portrays the beauty of nature and the stillness of seaside locations. Also highlights tropical landscapes' natural aspects, mainly land-sea interaction, with soft sandy beaches and coconut trees.
Mckeithan Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 7:56 PM
Thank you Sotto.
Greenhough Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Nice, soft sand complements a perfect day. Your micro poem says a lot.
Mckeithan Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Hilda
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 11:48 AM
A wonderful "Island" write. Few words with much said. Right now, I wish I was on a beach. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away...............
Mckeithan Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Thank you Paula. Dont we all:).
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 8:21 AM
- A nice picture of your island, Oliver :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Mckeithan Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Annr-Lise.
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