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Is This What You Call Living

Inhale and exhale wish he would save me From this hell Shout and scream I bet you have no I idea what I mean Sob and cry I Wish he would have never said goodbye Toss and turn for him I will never again yearn Speak and whisper He tore up my life like a big O'l tWister Jog and run I bet he had alot of fun Well I just want him to know His ignorance is what brought me to this hell I just thought I should tell him The tears I cry I'm gonna kiss goodbye they aren't meant for him And I'll never again care what he do Well I just thought I should pass along To Him The only thing that went wrong was him It was him Who brought all his problems along

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's "The Unread Poems"contest Ayla. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 3:33:00 AM
Ayla super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/24/2012 8:16:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2012 5:27:00 PM
Wow....I can really feel the emotion in this poem. The emotions are deep, and I can relate to this in some ways. From past ex"s but I am happyily married now... Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 7:22:00 AM
congrats on an excellent write and win luv.. nicely penned piece..
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Date: 7/21/2012 7:03:00 PM
sad write, the greatest gift in life is to be happy,no one can do that but you,Ayla
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