Is This?

Is this perdition,
   that I suffer so
In this inadequacy and 
affliction,
   Of sleep, woe?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 5, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Interesting question--one I guess only you can answer. Much for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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August 21, 2009 at 9:52 PM
Is this really a Haiku? I mean I really like the wording and the thought you bring through, but a Haiku is supposed to be composed of 3 lines, 5-7-5 syllable count. Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry that deals with nature. Senryu is theJapanese form of poetry that deals with human behavior.
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July 13, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku. Sara
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