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Is this perdition, that I suffer so In this inadequacy and affliction, Of sleep, woe?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/5/2009 11:37:00 AM
Interesting question--one I guess only you can answer. Much for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/21/2009 9:52:00 PM
Is this really a Haiku? I mean I really like the wording and the thought you bring through, but a Haiku is supposed to be composed of 3 lines, 5-7-5 syllable count. Haiku is a Japanese form of poetry that deals with nature. Senryu is theJapanese form of poetry that deals with human behavior.
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Date: 7/13/2009 4:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku. Sara
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