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Is She the One?

I never thought a day would come
When I would sit again and think about a lady
Having been battered and shattered by love
I thought myself incapable again.

Devoid of any emotion of love, I mix with people everyday
Having become hardened inside, I thought myself untouchable
I thought I was then living in paradise
A paradise made up of myself and my feelings.

I was broken inside ~ just ordinary
Feelings of unworthiness and boredom so acute
Until the moment I met you and behold
You proved I had just been waiting all along.

You set me out of my personal prison
You released the floodgate of my emotions again
You touched the core of my heart
Yes I am up, alive and living again!

I'm appealing to friends and foes alike
Is she really the one?
That will make my life worth living
Making me feel so fulfilled and wanted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/6/2011 6:07:00 AM
Thats a lovely poem you have there Andrew. Keep it up.Hope she heals ur heart.
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:03:00 PM
The things love can do. I rather be a referee in this game called love.
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:08:00 PM
Oh, I hope she IS the one to save your broken heart and bring some happiness back into your life, Jedidiah. Your lovely poem is very moving. Best wishes, Carolyn
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