Cherie Durbin Poet Rhyme

Is My Brother For Real

Is my brother for real?
He kicks and he bites.
He wets his bed
And starts terrible fights.

He picks his nose-
Can he be my kin?
Or is my brother...
An alien?

by Cherie Durbin

Written for Debbie Guzzi's "Real, UNreal and SURreal" contest. On the theme 
of "real".

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Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2011 at 11:01 PM this is terribly cute. heehee. (about that alien brother!!)

James Foulk April 19, 2011 at 3:32 PM sounds almost like me and my sister when i was a kid. really enjoyed this piece of creative poetry you penned.

Ellen Fahey April 17, 2011 at 6:21 AM This is adorable! I am the youngest of 9 children. I have six older brothers and always wanted a little brother. After reading this, I guess I should be thankful! lol! ~ Ellen