Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"is It Real?"

Is it real are the words I read...
Through the highs and the lows 
I stayed to see...
When we were confused we 
held each other through the night..
If life was tough I did my best to make
it bright..
When you were scared and shaken
I comforted your wounds...
I wrote for you to soothe you
and lift you from the ruins...
Is it real are the words I read...
You must know if you have to ask
how sad that makes me...

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Juan Paolo Galua July 20, 2010 at 12:58 AM Love the effect of comfort to me while reading this one Mike...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 19, 2010 at 9:15 AM OH how touching and emotional.. deep from within the heart.. may your luv always stay this way.. I comforted your wounds.. and lift u from the ruins.. a magnificent two lines .. for a perfect write from my White Knight.. with luv..

Seline Elaina July 19, 2010 at 6:18 AM Such sadness and turmoil. I wonder what the words are...thanks for the read!

Wilma Neels July 19, 2010 at 5:26 AM Interesting write Michael, so many different ways to look at it.. luv Wilma

Doris Culverhouse July 19, 2010 at 4:51 AM I have to agree with Mom, well written poem!!

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2010 at 4:47 AM Interesting thoughts penned ...I could go several ways with the interpertation..Sara